爆裂模式 发表于 2023-12-23 10:52   全显示 1楼
哇，写的很细腻，也很有温情，还有大环境和人性得善良与邪恶。千万不要绿啊。
就是感觉丝袜足交的剧情有点突然。要是在下文有妈妈的内心独白就更好了。更加丰盈这个人物，还有马明赶紧狗带。
只有妈妈的血亲滋味不够浓郁，要是妈妈也有妹妹或者是爸爸的妹妹也因为某事投奔家里就好了。
大大写的细腻有温情，很有代入感。期待大大的后文
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