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[离任作者] 【爱上仇人妻】（1-4）（已整理）[土郎五五五阅]

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我觉得文章写的不错，就是情节有点简单了．如果就写主人公为了报仇而爱上仇人妻似乎有点落入俗套，我觉得应当把握复仇这条主线，让矛盾更激化，让内容更丰满，这是我个人的一点拙见．

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